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Posts: 124 Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Plano, Texas Real First Name: Michael Camera: Nikon D3, Leica M9, Large Format Film Can Others Edit My Photos: No iTrader Rating: 0 LIKES Received: 6 LIKES Given: 0 |
11-04-2009, 06:55 PM
Hi Carissa,
Of course this is only one man's opinion and not gospel....
photo1
Too much sharpening in photoshop causes these halos. The original image needs a lot less processing to avoid these.
photo2
Lighten the foreground and mountain and darken the sky. The eye goes to the lightest area first, but I assume it is not what you want me to focus on
photo3
I like the effects and composition, but again the sky is too light.
photo4
Focus should have been all the way to the front (left pole) of the fence and crop the billboard out of there!
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Happy shooting and warm regards,
Michael
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