Logo

[jgrindal]

What do you think of the logo below?

[BeccaJ]

i love handwriting fonts, but that ones a little hard to read for me.

[texkam]

It's a beautiful image. However IMHO as a graphic designer, I'll give you some feedback.

Rather hard to read both from a font standpoint and from a scale standpoint. Can this work small, as a lapel pin for instance? Could you explain how the background image relates to the name? If I were to read your design brief perhaps I would be better able to tell you if it accomplishes your needs.

[toverman]

The font is too hard to read ... you want clients and potential clients to remember your business name, not struggle to read it.

[Jusselin]

Originally Posted by texkam

It's a beautiful image. However IMHO as a graphic designer, I'll give you some feedback.

Rather hard to read both from a font standpoint and from a scale standpoint. Can this work small, as a lapel pin for instance? Could you explain how the background image relates to the name? If I were to read your design brief perhaps I would be better able to tell you if it accomplishes your needs.

as a graphic designer also +1

[kenw]

a smidge of graphics design background here:

the test is too smushed (that's a technical term). Make it taller.

lose the fanciness on the font, the 3 is unreadable.

change the text layout so that the number 3 isn't at the extreme end. it unbalances the image. 2 lines, 3 lines, whatever.

is there a relationship between the background and the text? I don't see it.

overall, it's a bit fluffy for my tastes. I tend towards a simple Times New Roman or Helvetica/Futura for simple readability. This font might do better for a signature, but not a logo.

[d2creative]

I don't even know what it says before "photography".
And flourishes are sooooooo overdone!

[J Eddington]

No it does not work.

[Jusselin]

what is it supposed to say? i can only read photography

[ChristopherCoy]

3 corners photography...

[texkam]

I wish photographers would view logo/identity creation the same way they view wedding photography.

[ChristopherCoy]

Originally Posted by texkam

I wish photographers would view logo/identity creation the same way they view wedding photography.

I do...

[Hikin' Mike]

Originally Posted by ChristopherCoy

3 corners photography...

And I thought the 3 was a Z.


Doesn't work at all. I can't read it (obviously). It's too busy and I don't think it will reproduce well in all medias...just like 'texkam' mentioned.

Think in black in white (no gray tones) when you go to design something.

[jgrindal]

I appreciate the feedback. I am not designing this myself. I do not have the eye, hand or tools to do graphic design, but I wanted to get feedback from more than me to give back to the designer.

It sounds like the font is definately a no-go (I agree, it was in my notes as well). I know that this is not scalable to extremely small sizes, like a lapel pin. Frankly, I really don't need it to be. I'm trying to go for something elegant - perhaps a focus should be placed on more simplicity?

[J Eddington]

If this came from a designer, you may need to find a new one. He/she should know better.