Please give me feedback on these cards!This is a discussion on Please give me feedback on these cards! within the Business Talk forums, part of the Business Discussion category; ...
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04-02-2007, 03:00 PM
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Last edited by Michelle Allmon; 04-03-2007 at 12:35 AM..
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04-02-2007, 04:43 PM
I like the first one, but the second one lacks consistency in my opinion. They are all fine photos but nothing about the grouping tells me about your style as if they could have been taken by different photogs.
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04-02-2007, 08:14 PM
Thanks, I didn't even think about that! The second one, only one is a photo I love (maternity) but I picked the others b/c I thought those would "sell." I'm gonna look for some different ones.
Anybody else?
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04-02-2007, 09:17 PM
on the second.. maybe drop the headshot, and go wedding/maternity then baby shot.. in the order most prefer.. LOL
my card is similar, i have a maternity shot, then a newborn shot, then a child shot.. shows progression as well as what i specialize in. | | | |
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04-02-2007, 10:35 PM
I was thinking the same thing as Tasha. If you drop the headshot it'll be much more consistant. After all, we're assuming you can do a simple headshot with you other pics being so good.
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04-02-2007, 10:38 PM
thanks, i didn't have one on my old card and never got called for one, so i thought maybe that was why. but maybe people just don't want them?
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04-02-2007, 10:39 PM
i'll have a new one up soon, when my kid sleeps.
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04-02-2007, 10:39 PM
Any chance you could drop the headshot (as already suggested), rearrange so that the order is wedding / pregnant / baby (as already suggested) and use both the first and second (one on each side).
Homies' got skilz... Nice work
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04-02-2007, 10:42 PM
first and second what?
i like your new avatar.
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04-02-2007, 11:29 PM
oh, i get it now. hey, how about this one (changed image). i think i like it better. do you?
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04-03-2007, 12:25 AM
my friend suggested i add more color and i think i like it... anyone?
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04-03-2007, 07:35 AM
i like it.. but if you do front and back.. on the floral picture.. i would just use your logo.. not your info too since it will be on the back of the card..
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04-03-2007, 08:24 AM
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Originally Posted by Michelle Allmon first and second what?
i like your new avatar. | Thanks (avatar). If I could figure out how to make my latest one small enough I would change
I like the newest version but I agree with Tasha
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04-03-2007, 03:08 PM
hahaha, i originally had it without contact info on the floral side and yesterday someone told me to put it on both sides! hahaha!
thank you so much, guys!
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04-03-2007, 03:43 PM
Michelle,
Well, keep in mind this is my opinion... I think you should take "Sporting Events" off of that card. Do another card for sports only. That way, you have two, specific cards... one for events and one for sports. All of the other wording on the card can loosely fall into the "event" category.
I like the photos... not a big fan of the prego shots... but that's just me being quirky.
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