logo help!

[boliver]

i am very new here but i have noticed a lot of other posts about logo help. i have a few i've worked on recently and wanted to get some feedback. i am shooting children/families/newborns and i wanted to go with something simple. all advice/feedback is welcome!

the ones i have worked on should be attached. thanks!

[frameworthy]

First suggestion, can you separate them so that we can see them individually? For ME (don't know about others), it's all very...busy.

Also, my wife was looking over my shoulder and said an interesting statement (which I did not notice). It reads more like "blouse" than "b louise". I know that there is the separation in there...and I don't know of any suggestions except maybe using the head of the flower to separate them instead of the stem???

Just my .02

[Gabby498]

My pick with the design moved down between the b and the l.

[toverman]

I agree with Kenneth that the flower should be between the "b" and "louise." My preference is that any graphic element be incorporated into the logo rather than floating. For what you shoot, I think it's a fine and appropriate design.

[boliver]

thanks for the suggestions! i will separate...move some things around and repost. thanks again.

[boliver]

here are the changes...

before the flower i was using b::louise photography...my husband wanted me to try one with the colons again and have the flower as the "o".

again...all thoughts are welcome and very much appreciated!

[boliver]

sorry those are huge...

[CincoJoe]

They all look great. Just pick one...:)

[boliver]

thanks! dots or no dots?

[zoe08]

I like the one with the blue flower and pink outline or just the pink outline.

[frameworthy]

gonna have to say that from the second batch, the first one is money for me. personally, I like the solid flower as opposed to there being any negative space between the petals. I think that it helps separate the b and louise much better and sets the flower apart as it's own graphical element that can stand on its own.

that's my input, but in the same breath, I agree with Joe, they look good, pick one!

[boliver]

ok i am becoming more decisive thanks to you all! i have decided on one flower imparticular but made one slight change....let me know what your final vote is! thanks for all the great feedback!

[abril1127]

I like the 2nd one

[toverman]

Yes, I like the second one, too, with "photography" in red.

[zoe08]

I like the 2nd one also.