Eiffel TowerThis is a discussion on Eiffel Tower within the City Life forums, part of the Showcase category; 19yr old photographer from Dallas, Texas.
Taken on Canon Rebel XT.
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12-12-2007, 07:12 AM
19yr old photographer from Dallas, Texas.
Taken on Canon Rebel XT.
Critiques welcomed. 
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12-12-2007, 11:29 AM
The sky doesn't look right on my monitor. Too much yellow and green.
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12-12-2007, 11:41 AM
It looks a little yellow on my monitor.
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12-12-2007, 12:00 PM
ok snapshot. | | | |
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12-12-2007, 01:13 PM
I actually like the composition, the symmetry of the is almost perfect but may be off just a listtle bit (tilted to the left). The color balance is definitely off, unless you were going for a cross-processed look I think you might want to get your monitor calibrated. If cross-processed look is what you were going for I think you succeeded, I'm just not sure it fits the subject matter.
You've got some nice clouds, I'm betting this would make a really nice high-contrast black and white conversion.
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12-12-2007, 01:27 PM
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Originally Posted by CaptainTom ok snapshot. | I'm with Tom on this one. There are soooo many shots of famous buildings, it takes quite a unique perspective to get something unique and compelling. This just is not a compelling shot to me. Technically, it's very good; good sharpness, good exposure (though color is odd, as mentioned, but that may be purposeful).
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12-12-2007, 01:46 PM
Let's take this image and go completely nuts. Make it something that people will either say "oh no!" or "WoW".
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12-12-2007, 01:54 PM
I do like the composition, but the color is way off. I do like Tom's effort more than the original. | | | |
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12-12-2007, 02:01 PM
here is my quick play 
I agree with I really liking it but the color is off | | | |
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12-12-2007, 02:03 PM
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12-12-2007, 03:08 PM
I should have posted this in the original post, but the color is off on purpose. Your screens do not need to be calibrated. The reason I did it was because, frankly, you're right; the tower has been photographed many, many times. I wanted to add something a little more unique to the photograph by playing around with some post processing elements. I liked the composition, though, and I don't think the image is tilted?
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12-12-2007, 03:11 PM
I get you.... I do not see it tilted on my screen
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12-12-2007, 03:11 PM
But, if you all would like something a little more 'out there', a little more 'fun', try having a glance at these two photographs of mine: 
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12-12-2007, 03:13 PM
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Originally Posted by loana0320 I get you.... I do not see it tilted on my screen
let me know if you want me to take my play down and I will ;) | No, not at all! =). I appreciate the contribution. It looks really nice framed like that; I wish I knew how to do it :-p. I've never taken the time to google how to photoshop a frame, but I like it a lot. =)
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12-12-2007, 03:15 PM
thanks Stephen!
those frames are just a click away LOl.. is an action I use from here http://www.atncentral.com/download.htm#Frames | | | | | Thread Tools | | | | Display Modes | Linear Mode |
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