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Posts: 9,770 Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Fort Worth, Texas Real First Name: Todd Camera: Canon Can Others Edit My Photos: Yes iTrader Rating: 8 LIKES Received: 4 LIKES Given: 0 |
04-01-2008, 11:44 AM
The first one is awesome, and the other ones are good, too.
One thing I'd suggest that may help is opening the lens a little wider. On the fourth shot, the EXIF data confused me a little and I can't tell if you were at f/6.3 or f/9, but for a shot like that you could probably go f/2 or f/2.8 and blur out the background a little more while still keeping all of her in good focus. This may have helped all but the first (which I don't think needs help) be a hair better.
Only other thing I notice that may have helped the third one is to not have a tree in the background that perfectly frames her head (unless you intended to do that, in which case, cool!).
With the last one, more girl and flowers and less background (might even try a tighter crop) might make it better. |
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