C&C Starbucks sign

[sioleabha]

I wanted to get a picture of this sign at Starbucks, because the wording really captures what I was doing there -- enjoying my rewards. ;) I got it to look like I had imagined, but it still seems like it's missing something. Any advice? How would you have taken this picture differently?



EXIF:
Camera: Canon EOS Digital Rebel XTi
Exposure: 0.017 sec (1/60)
Aperture: f/5
Focal Length: 37 mm
ISO Speed: 200
Exposure Bias: 0/3 EV
Flash: Flash fired, red-eye reduction

[laawaaris]

how many angles did you take the sign picture from?

i'm not sure what your intentions were - to capture something of Starbucks culture or to emphasize the reward part

it really just depends on what your intention was ...

one idea is to take a picture of the sign and show the starbucks coffee shop in the background - blurred but still distinctive ... as if your reward is the relaxing environment of starbucks ... you might have to cut off part of the sign to do this and play with it

anyhow, that's just my take on it - it really depends on what you are going for ...