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Posts: 5,674 Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Cypress, Texas Real First Name: Ken Camera: Canon Can Others Edit My Photos: Yes iTrader Rating: 2 LIKES Received: 98 LIKES Given: 83 |
01-08-2009, 12:41 PM
agreeing, the rules are no different. In general terms, the rule of thirds would prefer that if the boat is placed as it is, that the 2/3s part be in FRONT of the boat, giving it somewhere to go visually. Also the water line is smack across the middle, which adds to the imbalance.
However it appears that the artist was trying to show a bridge (or something distant) in the background in which case the compostion isn't all that bad but the balance is still off due to the visual weight of the highly detailed and colorful boat, and the distant but supposedly important bridge being small and "hazy".
My dad was known to re-arrange elements in his watercolors (painting from a photo that he had taken) to obtain the best balance. Had this been a photo, when he got around to painting it he probably would have turned the boat around 180, strengthened the bridge by enlarging it ("moving" it a lot closer) and moved the water surface down to the 1/3 level.
Now that we've jumped all over it, is this something you did? or bought? or did someone you know paint this or buy this for you?? if so accept it in the spirit it was given.
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