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09-27-2011, 02:48 PM
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09-27-2011, 02:57 PM
Bingo....love the composition, exposure and color combination. | | | |
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09-27-2011, 03:01 PM
That is an amazing shot!! Really impressive all around.
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09-27-2011, 03:04 PM
Thanks Jeff. I sorta stumbled on this guy and he stayed put long enough for me to get a couple shots. I tried a silhouette originally, but it just didn't separate from the background, so a little fill flash and that's what it took. He flew off right after I got the shot, so I was pinching myself... lol! | | | |
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09-27-2011, 03:14 PM
The ones we stumble upon are oftentimes the best ones... like this shot.
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09-27-2011, 03:53 PM
This is really, really close to perfect... could score in the 90s in PPA print competition, maybe higher.. a slightly different crop, perhaps.. off axis fill would have been better, but overall....
WOW.
Impressed. Truly.
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09-27-2011, 04:02 PM
Thanks Brad and John! That means a lot to me, I appreciate that.
I agree, I'd have loved to put the flash off camera, but I had to work fast as he lifted up once on me between shots. This is cropped very slightly, I have a bit more room on the outside (maybe another 10%).
I cropped in just a bit in order to level the horizon and to help bring the size of the butterfly up a bit.
Maybe I'll get around to printing this one, some day... (I'm really bad about printing for myself - I hardly ever do.) | | | |
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09-27-2011, 04:31 PM
Very excellent, Todd-super good!!
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09-27-2011, 04:44 PM
I really like this shot. I think the first instinct is to do a tight crop. I think that in this picture the sense of space really ads something extra to it. | | | |
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09-27-2011, 05:28 PM
You nailed this one, Todd - I like the lighting, colors, composition. | | | |
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09-27-2011, 06:44 PM
I normally don't like shot with so little in focus, but this is a great exception. | | | |
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09-27-2011, 06:58 PM
Wonderful shot!! You really captured an all inspiring moment!
If I would have any nit about the shot, it would be that the stem to the flowers isn't straight. ;) And that is a very small nit....lol | | | |
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09-27-2011, 07:00 PM
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Originally Posted by Mish Wonderful shot!! You really captured an all inspiring moment!
If I would have any nit about the shot, it would be that the stem to the flowers isn't straight. ;) And that is a very small nit....lol | Damn Mother Nature and her crooked plants!
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09-27-2011, 07:07 PM
lol Imperfection is a wonderful thing.....=) But it did catch my eye.... in a disruptive way. | | | |
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09-27-2011, 07:47 PM
Hehehe... I know, it bugged me too. In fact, it was straight when I shot it, but then I noticed the horizon was tilted, so back to crooked it went. ha!
Thanks everybody!
Anyone have any cropping suggestions/ideas? I was inclined to crop heavily into it, but I sort of like the full size, so I left it. I'd thought about maybe a portrait crop, but not sure. | | | | | Thread Tools | | | | Display Modes | Linear Mode |
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