ok, here's the questions in specific to the photos. I had 2 strobes and one umbrella but experimented with different effects.
1. I had someone tell me I need rim light with the first but I see now I angled her face wrong and should have made sure the chin was angled more to the light - this was done with one strobe only.
2. I now see the shadow of the hair on her face and the shadow on her neck - this was a big problem. I believe the strobes were set differently at this point. one at 1/8 and the other at 1/4. - i'm thinking that I shouldn't use the dark background behind someone with dark hair.
3. the shadows are everywhere and it didn't help the shirt was an oversized shirt on the model. I have shadows at her shirt, neck and nose - I'm just fustrated with the out come of the photos.
4.
ok here is a bigger shot of number four. I did work hard to get rid of the shadows, I was told I should have tryied to put a reflector under the model to take out the umbrella she's holding and the shadow of her chin. Out of all of them, this is my favorite without the problems.
Please I would love any feedback to solutions - I will test another model again this week.