Water Lilly From Tyler

[donlfaulkner]

Here's another flower from the Tyler Rose Garden.

C&C welcome and needed. Thanks for looking.

[Glassman]

Hi Don, I love Lilies and you are off to a good start here, the background is dark like I like and think looks better but to me the flower at the top right in the black distracts m a little. I would like it better if you had not cropped out the top part of the pedals at top of picture and on the left side the pedal that sticks out past the others may need some work. The center needs more sharpening. Now to some it may seem like I am over criticizing but you asked (C&C welcome and needed) and I think you mean it and want to improve. I will say I am not an expert and all I am giving is my opinion. Here's what I think it could be with a little work on your part. I hope this helps as I am just like you always wanting to do better and maybe some here can offer more suggestions to make it even better.

[donlfaulkner]

Thanks Billy. I had not even noticed that pedal on the left and the bottom nor the flower in the upper right background. I cropped too close in camera and need to watch that. These are the things I need to learn. I like what you did to my picture. You reminded me, too, that I need to come up with a copyright that is fitting. I like the one you used. It's simple.

[Glassman]

Originally Posted by donlfaulkner

Thanks Billy. I had not even noticed that pedal on the left and the bottom nor the flower in the upper right background. I cropped too close in camera and need to watch that. These are the things I need to learn. I like what you did to my picture. You reminded me, too, that I need to come up with a copyright that is fitting. I like the one you used. It's simple.

Don, I'm glad you like it, the font is Script MT Bold and to make the copyright symbol Hold the alt key down and press 0169 then release the alt key. It works best using the number keys on the right side of keyboard.