1st Real Estate Ad We've Done...

[SupaDave03]

A web page we did for the home owner in hopes to help get this beautiful house sold. This is the first real estate AD we have ever done let me know what you think. Link: Features:

[groovyone]

Love the lawnchair shot. On the small house one I would give the house a little more room on the sides to avoid the distortion, or fix it in post. The bigger photo, I'd try to get the gutter to run vertical, reduce the slant a little.

Just my 2c though.

The page itself looks good. I love the text for the address and price, very nice!

[SupaDave03]

Originally Posted by groovyone

Love the lawnchair shot.

Reminds me of the Corona commercial minus the sand and Corona's

Originally Posted by groovyone

On the small house one I would give the house a little more room on the sides to avoid the distortion, or fix it in post. The bigger photo, I'd try to get the gutter to run vertical, reduce the slant a little.

I see what you mean about the big one. I was trying to work the angle and give it a different perspective...Thanks for the CC

Originally Posted by groovyone

The page itself looks good. I love the text for the address and price, very nice!

Thanks

[groovyone]

Originally Posted by SupaDave03

Reminds me of the Corona commercial minus the sand and Corona's

I did feel thirsty...

[texkam]

Very nice.
Design nits. Move the first 4 paragraphs to the right a bit to match the spacing(padding?) of the last 7. I don't have a problem with the severe angle of the photo (very dramatic), but I don't like the top of the roof kissing the border. Just a tiny bit of air please. I'd also go with just one shade of red on the type.

[Flea77]

I agree the shot with the chairs is great, the larger shot is in need of a little room at the top but otherwise I like it, the one that bothers me is the other one. The house is a little too dark and so is the sky, it looks a little too HDRish with the sky brighter at the roofs and then getting too dark as it goes up. With the shadow of the trees you know where the sun is so the sky should not be lighter at the bottom in the shot.

Allan

[SupaDave03]

Originally Posted by texkam

I don't have a problem with the severe angle of the photo (very dramatic), but I don't like the top of the roof kissing the border. Just a tiny bit of air please.

Yea I know what you mean I noticed it as well, but I only had a 24-70 really needed that 14-24 to get all to fit. Thanks for the CC