Ad suggestions

[RochinPhotography]

So I had to toss an ad together for a magazine we advertise in. Set up a quick shoot yesterday and slapped this together. Anything you guys can think of I can change (in a short amount of time?)

[Adria1369]

Only suggestion I have is to make the car color match in both photos, otherwise... pretty funny concept! ;-)

[Silverstangs]

OK, let me be the typical Gear head GUY...
... Attractive chick -Check
…Chick in tease cloths -Check
... Product in picture -Check
... Product strategically placed -Double Check

I would buy that.


Now let me be the photographer
…Very nice concept, it definitely portraits what the product can do and the struggle that you can have without it as well as add some humor.
…Things to improve… make his shirt and under his arms dirty. Make the car match colors. Also, come up with a license plate of your company to replace the license plate. It is another spot to advertise without being over the top.

I think your company colors are red, black and white, so you might consider having your model wear red, black and white instead of PINK, black and white, just to tie her in better with the product and your company. Also, her shirt is slightly blown out... The Ferrari Girls, all wear Red with black trim and the Ferrari logo above the heart.

[RochinPhotography]

Scott,

All GREAT points. Some of which I thought about. (Plate, dirty shirt) but like I said. thought about it called my friend to do the shoot and shot it all in one day pretty much.