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Flyer Feedback ... - 07-11-2006, 02:02 PM


I could use some feedback on a flyer I did for the barn. This is something we plan to post at at public pegboards in rec centers and what not. Hence the tear tags on the right.

Thoughts and suggestions welcome.

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07-11-2006, 02:17 PM


Not crazy about the font or color on the $25 lessons at the bottom there...maybe smaller font and yellow?

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07-11-2006, 02:22 PM


But having said that, did it catch your eye? Remember this is a sales image. That price needs to jump off the image. The price and the horse are the two most important parts.

So from a consumer POV, does it need to change? I mean from a design POV you want it more seemless, but that won't catch the eye of a passer-by.

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07-11-2006, 02:32 PM


the price jumps out so that will work from what you said. I would say that the text down the right side needs to be pulled in a bit. Just too close to the edge. I am also a little confused about the name of the stables. Is it called "The Horse Stables" Or "about the horse" Stables?

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07-11-2006, 09:25 PM


What about. ...new Equestrian Facility now open in the Fairfield area... or just opening in the Fairfield...

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