Building portfolio - my first subjects. C&C Wanted!

[Sonny]

TPF meet Briana and Iliana. I am building a portrait portfolio and these sisters were my first official victims...err...subjects.

Don't hold back. Be honest and do not sugar coat it. I take constructive criticism well. Thanks.

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[extxdpscamaro]

Very cute and very balanced shots! I think 2&3 are my favorites :)

[Sonny]

that bad...huh?

[dhphoto]

I like these a lot...Good personalities and expressions...I really like the composition on 2 just maybe a little tighter crop. Lighting, color, and processing look great too.

[HeatherLou]

Pftht, you know there not bad! I really like #1, #2 & #6 and the others are solid.

You are going to do well with this!

[toverman]

The shots are great, and the kids are cute and full of personality. Although the baby scares me a little when she doesn't smile ... don't tick her off or she'll get you!

[my3peas]

Sonny these are great!!! I think you did awesome!

nitpicks: the vignettes are a little strong, IMO, but that's my taste.

my favorites are #6 and #3 :)

awesome!

[texxter]

Love these images, especially #2 - love how you've framed her with vertical and horizontal lines - she's all wiggly and contrasts strongly with the formal grid of lines behind her. Nicely done!

[Mindy H]

These are great! I love #3....and, my only cc on that one is to get rid of the person or whatever that is in the background.

[w9ctm]

I too like #'s 2 and 3. I had to look at #3 fior a bit though. She almost gets lost in #3 with all the green busyness around her. But at the same time, the red dress helps bring the focus to the center of the picture and her.

[Sonny]

Thank you guys very much!

Even after one shoot, I have learned so much. Stuff that I missed, stuff that I've should of done, etc. I can't wait til the next one. woot woot.