Portfolio Shoot, Grapevine

[T. Adam Martin]

This past weekend we worked with a model to help diversify her portfolio and wanted to get feedback on these first two images. I'd like to consider some C&C before I begin processing all the other images. I look forward to hearing your feedback.

[David Whatley]

For me Tyler, I never like to look up someones nose. One number 2, the detail in the blacks are lost, maybe you can bring that out some in post?

[heathercaptures]

#1 her eyes are very pretty and the nose didn't bother me until I read Davids post..lol
#2 I like but the dress does fade into the background

[49884]

#1 showing a bit much on the white of the eyes. The up nose doesn't bother me, she has a cute nose. Maybe smooth her lips a little.
#2 Try any coloring of the sky?