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07-03-2010, 01:30 PM
Eldon,
The specular highlights on her face and lips are a little distracting, the angle is not doing much for me, I would like for her to be looking at the camera, where her neck and under her chin meets there are some kind of lines (this is the brightest part of the pic and that brings attention to this area), her face is a little dark, a hair light would help a lot to bring her out from the background, it looks like your fill is directly in front of her face causing your specular highlights. These are just my opinions so take them with whatever weight you wish.
Keep pushing forward, she's a great looking model and hopefully you will get the chance again to shoot her. |
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