CC- off camera flash (shoot thru umbrella used)

[greeneyes1976]

I've been practicing and today is the happiest I've been with the out come...I would love some CC on what I could improve on as far as the lighting.

I went with a soft light on one and a more dramatic light on the other...



Sorry about his face that's his so called mean look...

[Debbi]

I think the first one is great. You have balanced the light well. The second needs some more light in his left eye but what an adorable "mean look".

[greeneyes1976]

thanks Debbie for your insight...i knew you would say that about that one dark side, lol

[sbug_adam]

hah, the 2nd one is cute. looks like he sniffed a fart LOL

[tukaniray]

I like the lighting here. Definitely something you see on athletes.

The face is great.

-Ray-

[Phisch]

I love the expression in the second one, no need to apologize, it's great. I'm not familiar with off-camera lighting so I'm not sure how to comment on that.

[apollo.11]

nice work. a reflector on the 2nd one would have balanced out the shadows.