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This is a discussion on Plus Model Stephanie within the People forums, part of the Showcase category; I tried out a couple new PS Actions I got. Shot with her a couple days ago and we had ...

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Plus Model Stephanie - 03-18-2011, 06:17 PM

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I tried out a couple new PS Actions I got. Shot with her a couple days ago and we had a lot of fun! Even got some A&M Pics in there too!
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03-18-2011, 06:39 PM


I like it. Simple blackout background. Classic modeling pose. Pretty young lady. I would like to see a little hair highlight, though. Overall, well done.
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03-18-2011, 11:09 PM


I agree with what Glen says, but I think her skin looks way too smooth. It's unnatural. Besides that, this is great. I like the color and the contrast a lot.

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03-19-2011, 10:02 PM


Monica, nice headshot, I like her natural expression and how you've posed her. The lighting is also appropriate for this portrait.

My nitpicks have to do with lack of separation between dark and dark background, as Glen pointed out - a headlight would take care of this. Secondly, I think that small details like placing the necklace correctly and arranging her hair better around her neck would give the portrait a more polished finish. Finally, I see a difference in skin tonality between the face and her chest, dont know that it's the makeup or the software you used for smoothing the skin. Not a biggie but a bit noticeable.

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