Glamour Shoot with Kimberly

[hhscr]

Shot these a few nights ago, let me know what you think.

[spluloacle]

I don't like her neck on #2 but I love the others. Especially the snake. :)

[danchez]

she's a beautiful woman, but your skin smoothing technique needs improving.

[49884]

Hey Darrell. First off these look pretty darn good. But looking at #1 her lipstick looks like it could have used some freshening up and there is some kind of splotchyness on her lower left lip. Also her irises look different, notice the light in her right eye and the lack of in her left particularly in the lower part. These items can quickly be fixed in post.
On #2 again the color in her lips is blotchy. The black outline of her left iris is definitely in need of a touch up. The pupil on her right eye also looks to be darkened and not centered in both 1 and 2. Not sure if you did anything with them but it could be touched up and look much better. On #2 why is the upper right corner of the photo black? Is that just how the background was?
#1 is my fav, love the color of her hair!

[hhscr]

Originally Posted by danchez

she's a beautiful woman, but your skin smoothing technique needs improving.

Thanks for the reply, but it does not help much. Any details regarding a comment like this would be helpful

[hhscr]

Originally Posted by 49884

Hey Darrell. First off these look pretty darn good. But looking at #1 her lipstick looks like it could have used some freshening up and there is some kind of splotchyness on her lower left lip. Also her irises look different, notice the light in her right eye and the lack of in her left particularly in the lower part. These items can quickly be fixed in post.
On #2 again the color in her lips is blotchy. The black outline of her left iris is definitely in need of a touch up. The pupil on her right eye also looks to be darkened and not centered in both 1 and 2. Not sure if you did anything with them but it could be touched up and look much better. On #2 why is the upper right corner of the photo black? Is that just how the background was?
#1 is my fav, love the color of her hair!

Thanks for the reply. I will go back and take a closer look at the eyes I did not do any touchup on the eyes. I see what your talking about on the lipstick. The black background is just how it was, it is an open window at night.

[Redneck]

They're all very good. The third one might be a little too busy with snake and glass. But that's just my opinion. Over all great work, very "glamorish".

[hhscr]

Originally Posted by spluloacle

I don't like her neck on #2 but I love the others. Especially the snake. :)

The snake was her idea. I'm not much of a snake guy, but I do like the shot!

Thanks for replying.

[danchez]

Originally Posted by hhscr

Thanks for the reply, but it does not help much. Any details regarding a comment like this would be helpful

specular highlights all over her face make it look like she has very oily skin. you could try oil blotting paper before shooting and check you tube for different techniques on skin smoothing.

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Originally Posted by danchez

specular highlights all over her face make it look like she has very oily skin. you could try oil blotting paper before shooting and check you tube for different techniques on skin smoothing.

Thanks for the details, it was getting a little warm during the shoot, I will have to remember to keep the makeup fresh.