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From a recent session - 06-28-2011, 08:23 PM

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Hi All! Just a quick post tonight requesting some feedback of a recent session. She wanted some that were a bit more "fashionable" so I tried to get that as much as possible. Please let me know what you think!

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6. Not everyone likes the PP, but I do.


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06-28-2011, 11:29 PM


Not a big fan of the lip biting, it's a seductive pose in non-seductive photos. She has great hair and I think it goes really well with the processing of #6, is that lens flair natural or did you add it in?

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06-28-2011, 11:32 PM


I like the lighting and simplicity of #2 and #7 - the pose of her hand on #7 is delicate and elegant, as is her expression. Nicely done!

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06-29-2011, 03:43 PM


I think 7's good. The rest strike me as snapshots.

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06-29-2011, 09:47 PM


Thanks for the input so far!

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Not a big fan of the lip biting, it's a seductive pose in non-seductive photos. She has great hair and I think it goes really well with the processing of #6, is that lens flair natural or did you add it in?
Yeah, I'm not going to get into the lip biting story, haha.. And the processing in #6 is all added.. It's an action I got from Jen's Fabulous Stuff.. The PS lens flair is pretty awful in my opinion.
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06-29-2011, 11:27 PM


+1 on the lip biting, but that's already been addressed.

Very nice work overall, but I don't care for the pose in #3--it looks a little too sultry for a girl her age. Maybe I'm making more of it than I should, but as the father of a teenage girl, I wouldn't care to have my daughter pose that way. On the positive side though, I find the pose somewhat reminiscent of the Hollywood glamor photos of old, and on an "older" gal (you know...an old lady--in her twenties) that pose would be just great.

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07-01-2011, 05:12 PM


Yeah, she wants to be a model so she was trying out all her poses. Her mom was with us, too. But I understand what you are saying.
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