My first CC upload, in back yard

[abdi]

Any CC is appreciated

[auddii]

I like the concept behind all of these. I think the first three are a tad dark, and could use some fill flash or a reflector for those outside. Also, the focus looks a little soft. I know there are some problems with compression with some sites that are used to host photos before posting. If the pictures look just like this on your hard drive, try focusing on the eyes, as that is where the viewer should be drawn to.

Beautiful little girls! I love the colors and the poses are cute. Looking forward to seeing more of your work.

[Tom]

Beautiful little girls.

The first one looks to be a little cold and could use a white balance adjustment a little warmer to make the skin look more natural.

I really don't like desaturation techniques like in picture two, because to me, it makes their skin look like zombies. I think I would like it much better in full color and a bit brighter.

Three is very cute, but I would crop out some of the space on the right so she isn't so centered. Also, next time try to pose her hand so it doesn't get cut off. Right on her lap would be fine.

In four, the shadows are a bit orange and it looks like your shutter speed was a bit slow and isn't sharp consequently. Again, I would like to see the left arm. But a very cute picture.

[bryanlindsey]

Awesome!

[pea1036]

Love the pics!!!! Great job :)

[abdi]

thanks guys,for the advice and suggestions.