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La Previa De Audrey
This is a discussion on La Previa De Audrey within the People forums, part of the Showcase category; So I will be doing Audrey's Qunce In Dec. But last week I was able to do her dress session. ...
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10-08-2011, 12:23 PM
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So I will be doing Audrey's Qunce In Dec. But last week I was able to do her dress session. CC always welcome! 1.  2.  Thanks Holland TXhummer2 likes this. --------------------------- Nikon D80, D40, Tamron SP AF70-200mm F/2.8 Di, Tamron SP AF 17-50mm f/2.8 XR Di II LD IF, Nikkor 55-200mm 1:4-5.6G ED, Nikkor 18-55mm 1:3.5-5.6GII ED, Nikkor 50mm 1:1.8D www.hjgphotography.com |
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10-16-2011, 09:30 PM
nothing from anyone? --------------------------- Nikon D80, D40, Tamron SP AF70-200mm F/2.8 Di, Tamron SP AF 17-50mm f/2.8 XR Di II LD IF, Nikkor 55-200mm 1:4-5.6G ED, Nikkor 18-55mm 1:3.5-5.6GII ED, Nikkor 50mm 1:1.8D www.hjgphotography.com |
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10-16-2011, 09:42 PM
Need a little bit more fill light. Other than that, they are good. |
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10-16-2011, 09:42 PM
Nice pictures & She is very pretty. Good job!!! |
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10-16-2011, 10:10 PM
I agree with Viet, I'd like to see a little bit of light on her back in #2. And I'm a sucker for shallow depth of field so I'd like to see a bit more separation from the background. Looks like you made her comfortable in front of the camera, she has a great smile! |
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10-17-2011, 08:20 PM
Cool thanks guys! I will keep the fill light in mind next time! =) --------------------------- Nikon D80, D40, Tamron SP AF70-200mm F/2.8 Di, Tamron SP AF 17-50mm f/2.8 XR Di II LD IF, Nikkor 55-200mm 1:4-5.6G ED, Nikkor 18-55mm 1:3.5-5.6GII ED, Nikkor 50mm 1:1.8D www.hjgphotography.com |
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10-17-2011, 09:30 PM
Consider a tighter crop with both of these. In the 1st one, she is a little small in the image. Leaves a lot room for the eyes to wonder around in the image. Make her larger in the image. Image 2, she is in the bottom 2/3rds of the image. Lots of image to look around in above her head. Also, next time instead of pointing the elbow towards the camera, have her point it more behind her or camera right. Easy to check and see what you think. If you do make a change the crop, repost for us to see, please. Also, really like the fill flash and pose!!! Hope this helps! Pat --------------------------- In Texas, it ain't braggin if you're just tellin the truth! |
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10-23-2011, 07:29 PM
Thanks everyone. I will crop and repost. Sorry for taking so long, it has be a crazy week for me. --------------------------- Nikon D80, D40, Tamron SP AF70-200mm F/2.8 Di, Tamron SP AF 17-50mm f/2.8 XR Di II LD IF, Nikkor 55-200mm 1:4-5.6G ED, Nikkor 18-55mm 1:3.5-5.6GII ED, Nikkor 50mm 1:1.8D www.hjgphotography.com |
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