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Elizabeth Marx
This is a discussion on Elizabeth Marx within the People forums, part of the Showcase category; Working on upping the quality of my work. If you have a second, I'd really like to hear what you ...
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10-09-2011, 03:29 PM
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Working on upping the quality of my work. If you have a second, I'd really like to hear what you guys have to say about my image, especially any and all thoughts on how best to improve.  --------------------------- "A camera, like a guitar, is just a box with a hole in it. Until it is placed in the hands of a TRUE artist, it will not make music, only noise." |
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10-09-2011, 03:48 PM
Adrian, these are just my opinion(s).... the hand appearing out of nowhere is odd the tilt has me tilting my head Lighting looks good thought a bit hot on her forehead and cheek --------------------------- Support Pixtus by Purchasing Your Gear from: B&H Photo, Amazon, or Adorama Our Forum Rules | Report posts that break the Site Rules Dark Sky Finder Thread |
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10-09-2011, 05:48 PM
I agree with Ken's comments, but I like the look you are going for. The other thing I don't like about the hand is that it reminds me of a British salute. The backwards hand I usually associate with the dramatic swoon of the Victorian age (obviously it would have to go with a more dramatic facial and body pose). Also, the background is rather busy, but she is separated nicely, so it isn't as distracting as I would have imagined. However, I'm not a fan of the can light that is still in the top of the photo. Love the contrast of the lighting with the warm background. --------------------------- You can't be a real country unless you have a beer and an airline. It helps if you have some kind of a football team, or some nuclear weapons, but at the very least you need a beer. ~Frank Zappa |
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10-09-2011, 08:20 PM
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10-09-2011, 08:22 PM
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The the background I shot in was the entrance to the studio here in Conroe. Will keep all your other pointers in mind. --------------------------- "A camera, like a guitar, is just a box with a hole in it. Until it is placed in the hands of a TRUE artist, it will not make music, only noise." | |
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