I've Missed Commercial WorkThis is a discussion on I've Missed Commercial Work within the People forums, part of the Showcase category; Its nice to do a commercial style image again... I need to start getting out there to find more of ...
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10-13-2011, 06:25 PM
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Its nice to do a commercial style image again... I need to start getting out there to find more of that work... I misses it.
Its All About the Hat... 
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10-13-2011, 06:29 PM
Very nice! No critiques from me, sorry. I think it looks great.
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10-13-2011, 08:49 PM
Thanks, Audrey.
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10-13-2011, 08:53 PM
Very nice Brad. I like how the catchlights are right in the middle of her eyes. The only thing that I would change is to make her teeth whiter. They look a bit dingy compared to the whites of her eyes. | | | |
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10-13-2011, 09:04 PM
Ya.. Charrie.. I've debated about that. She's wearing a retainer, so they look a little out of focus as well... been trying to decide what to do.
Thanks for lookin!
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10-13-2011, 09:15 PM
You talked me into it... whitened the teeth, replaced above.
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10-13-2011, 10:27 PM
Oh, much better! :) | | | |
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10-14-2011, 05:42 AM
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Originally Posted by brad Ya.. Charrie.. I've debated about that. She's wearing a retainer, so they look a little out of focus as well... been trying to decide what to do.
Thanks for lookin! | Yeah, I shot some the other day and one of the girls had in an invisalign retainer as well. didnt know it during the shoot, but man does it show up in review!
Photo looks great Brad! Have always been a fan of your work.
(So much so that I am planning to make a trip to Ft.Worth and bring my oldest up there to you, to shoot her Sr. photos.)
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10-14-2011, 11:07 AM
Thanks, Greg!
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