Desirée

[arich]

Did my girlfriend's graduation photos yesterday, we did multiple looks (had 75 good keepers) but I can't show all those so here are some for CC. There are a couple more available for viewing on my blog Sneak Peek: Desirée's graduation photos | Andrew Richardson Photography | Blog

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[arich]

Bump for CC lol, people aren't my strong suit so I'm really looking to get some constructive critique.

[duronboy]

#1: My favorite. The pose could be a little more dynamic, and the weeds pointing toward her neck worry me. 35mm isn't my favorite portrait length, and when you're shooting up on her, makes those hips pointing straight at the camera look wider than they really are.

#2: Darkness under the eyes. You either needed fill, or a srim above her to keep that toplight light from creating those sockets.

#3: Again, the pose could be a lil more dynamic. Her shoulders and hips are head-on towards the camera. When hair is illuminated from behind, it needs to be brushed immediately before hand.

[texkam]

Pretty girl, but the wide angle lens on 2 is not that flattering IMHO.

[arich]

Thanks guys, exactly what I was looking for. I need to get a 50mm prime since ingot rid of my 17-55. I have some better poses I might put up. Thanks again.