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Sunset Fun Pt 2 - 01-28-2012, 08:04 PM

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Part 2 of my last thread, these were shot with a couple small flashes with shoot thru umbrellas as key and fill lights, CC please:


By davidmsager at 2012-01-29


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01-28-2012, 08:52 PM


The first is the best IMO but it could definitely use more fill light, rather underexposed. Also her pose is a little bleh, she's posing in a swimsuit, maybe try to have her look more seductive or at least playful?

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01-28-2012, 10:56 PM


1 is really good, the 2nd and third... not so much.

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01-29-2012, 11:41 AM


First post updated with exposure corrections, my eyes must have been pretty tired last night, ha

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