Sunset Fun Pt 2

[78novacaine]

Part 2 of my last thread, these were shot with a couple small flashes with shoot thru umbrellas as key and fill lights, CC please:


By davidmsager at 2012-01-29


By davidmsager at 2012-01-29


By davidmsager at 2012-01-29

[arich]

The first is the best IMO but it could definitely use more fill light, rather underexposed. Also her pose is a little bleh, she's posing in a swimsuit, maybe try to have her look more seductive or at least playful?

[danchez]

1 is really good, the 2nd and third... not so much.

[78novacaine]

First post updated with exposure corrections, my eyes must have been pretty tired last night, ha