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02-01-2012, 10:50 PM
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02-01-2012, 11:03 PM
I Like it! The concept and execution is good. Detail including cloud shadows. Nice touch.
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02-01-2012, 11:04 PM
thanks
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02-02-2012, 07:24 AM
Nice! Well done.
It would be better if it was an original NES though. hahah
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02-02-2012, 09:09 AM
Nice, I would remove the sofa from the background if you can to really give the impression he's sitting on the clouds and not the sofa. I would also burn in the screen image you put on the tv as it really jumps out form the rest of the image by being so bright
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02-02-2012, 03:26 PM
couch removed, yoda added, lol thanks again for looking
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02-02-2012, 03:30 PM
hah, nice job on getting the couch out. It does look even better now.
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02-02-2012, 05:19 PM
Nice job with the couch! I would have stuck with the Mario image though, thought it played well with your son as the subject.
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02-02-2012, 05:30 PM
I agree. The Mario theme with the clouds is a better connection than with Lego Yoda ...
Definitely like the concept.
I still feel the screen is still a dominant factor. And it seems a bit odd to have your son in focus and not the TV stand. Throws off the plane of DOF.
For grins ... could you put in a Mario Kart Photo on screen instead. The character that starts the races is on a cloud. Kinda puts your son in the game. :)
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02-02-2012, 07:03 PM
great, thanks.. yes his request was yoda....
though i do agree now mario is a better fit.. back to the drawing board.. lol,,, mario cart hunt begins
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02-17-2012, 03:42 PM
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02-17-2012, 04:08 PM
Very cool concept.
But honestly. I play Super Mario Brothers like this daily. I fact, I just finish putting my cloud away as I have just finished a game.
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