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This is a discussion on 水 : Water within the People forums, part of the Showcase category; Critique, Critique, CRITIQUE!!!! Darn it. I was too quick to hit the Post button. Mods can you change the critique ...
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02-11-2012, 02:37 AM
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 Critique, Critique, CRITIQUE!!!! Darn it. I was too quick to hit the Post button. Mods can you change the critique setting for me? I love you long time!!! --------------------------- "A camera, like a guitar, is just a box with a hole in it. Until it is placed in the hands of a TRUE artist, it will not make music, only noise." |
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02-11-2012, 06:58 AM
Ha, Adrian, click edit and then go advanced. You can then edit the drop down menu. I'm actually not a huge fan of this photos. The picture is dominated by a blurry background (the shirt is ~2/3 of the photo). The subject right at the 1/3 mark, and so I think the composition works, but the background just isn't blurry enough to not draw my attention. I think either a shorter depth of field or better separation from the background would have worked better. (Have your kid grow longer arms  )I like the concept of this, but I just don't really know where to look right now. --------------------------- You can't be a real country unless you have a beer and an airline. It helps if you have some kind of a football team, or some nuclear weapons, but at the very least you need a beer. ~Frank Zappa |
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02-11-2012, 07:56 AM
Audrey, I agree - - you do not know where to look. However, if you crop it square by bringing the left side in, then what remains of the fuzzy stripes actually points to the main subject, focusing your attention there, and the fact that the shirt is so prominent diminishes. --------------------------- I welcome comments on any picture I post... Thanks. Tripod - (n., archaic.) 1. Image stabilization Wes Clavey, WB2SVF | My LUG Gallery Album |
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02-11-2012, 08:52 AM
Can Others Edit My Photos: Yes Adrian has this set to yes. Please feel free to crop and/or edit the photo. Here is my version. --------------------------- Support Pixtus by Purchasing Your Gear From: B&H Photo | Amazon | Adorama Check out the NEW Pixtus Photography Cheat Sheet! Our Forum Rules | Report posts that break the Site Rules | Lightroom Learning Center |
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02-11-2012, 10:54 AM
Ok. I see what you guys mean now. Thanks everyone. Yeah I should have probably used a different lens, since this was shot with a 24-105 f/4. So I don't think f/4 doesn't give a pleasing depth of field in this shot. Nice edit @Sonny. Now only the crop, but the b+w conversion makes the image stronger methinks. I'll go bang my head on a wall now. Brb :P Stifled_1 likes this. --------------------------- "A camera, like a guitar, is just a box with a hole in it. Until it is placed in the hands of a TRUE artist, it will not make music, only noise." |
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02-11-2012, 11:08 AM
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02-11-2012, 12:31 PM
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