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First attempt............ - 06-26-2005, 02:06 PM


O.K. guys don't hold back on the comments. This is my first attempt to do bridal/wedding shots.(all in one day mind you) I shot a wedding yesterday for two of my employees for free so its not like I was going to have that much pressure on me right? WRONG! The location was not optimal at all. There were a lot of distracting scenery in the back ground and the wedding took place overlooking a lake at 4 pm facing west! I am going through the post processing right now and wanted to post this pic and gather some comets. So please, fire away!


ISO 100, lens 70-200 F2.8L IS, Camera 300D, Flash 580 EX (fired)

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Alrighty then, color, tone good. Framing good. Light good. Background, you know. Her dress blowing? up against her legs makes it look like her tummy is stickin' out.
Can you clone out that truck? Would take less than a minute. Or write just married with a shoe polish brush in white on the back window :shock:

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06-26-2005, 03:09 PM


the Boss shoots the wedding and you had pressure???
Overall, a nice shot but maybe a little more light on her face and wyatt is right about the truck, it's soft enough in the background and should be cloned out

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Not much I could add to what Wyatt and Nathan said other then to say that being your first time doing this it is a good first try.
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