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First Collage Attempt - 05-20-2005, 01:27 PM


What do you think? Colors? Arrangement? Entire concept?


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05-20-2005, 02:09 PM


Only two things bug me.. and they are both nitpicks...

The center photo touches three of the other photos, but not the fourth.. it looks strange to me.

The abrupt stop of the white part of the wall at the top right in the center photo keeps drawing my attention away.. can it be cropped or cloned?

Other than that, I love the idea and the presentation.. and the pictures are awesome, too. Great Job.

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05-20-2005, 07:26 PM


Ditto with what brad said, although I didn't notice the white part at first. I also noticed the top right corner of the center picture touches the male in the top right picture, which kinda bugs me. Neat setup though.

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05-20-2005, 07:43 PM


Do like it, it looks really nice.

But has been stated I would crop the center picture a little and get that white part off.

But it is a very good looking image.

What would be neat to do is print out each image and mount the small ones on black form core and then mount them on the big image.

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Looks real good. I like it. Nice pictures.

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The only suggestion I have to add is to maybe try the center image as your background and re-arrange the other four. Seems to me the center image is the odd man out as the othe 4 dominate with how close up the shots are.

Just my 2 cents.

Images are very nice!

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The only suggestion I have to add is to maybe try the center image as your background and re-arrange the other four. Seems to me the center image is the odd man out as the othe 4 dominate with how close up the shots are.

Just my 2 cents.

Images are very nice!

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I like that idea. It would work GREAT!

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