Opinions Please:)

[idnurse41]

I am working on this for a friend of mine who's daughter graduates next year..she was wanting a "Graduation" announcement....suggestions for improvement more than welcome!

[tukaniray]

Nice composite.

For me, I would want to move the right picture a little more to the right and get more of that sun. Also can you photoshop out the airplane stream lines going right through her face? They are a bit distracting.

And I would also processes her photo layers seperate to have a bit more contrast. To kind of follow the contrast of the BG.

Other than that, for me, this composite looks pretty good.

-Ray-

[revjvegas]

I like the images of the grad, but the sunset is distracting to me because the eye is drawn toward the brightest part of the picture.

I like the concept though; perhaps not as much opacity on the right image so it stands out from the background a bit more. Or bring up the opacity on the background so its not as overpowering.

[The Philos]

Originally Posted by revjvegas

I like the images of the grad, but the sunset is distracting to me because the eye is drawn toward the brightest part of the picture.

I like the concept though; perhaps not as much opacity on the right image so it stands out from the background a bit more. Or bring up the opacity on the background so its not as overpowering.

You have your directions on the opacity reversed. More opacity = less transparent.

[revjvegas]

Whoops.
Yes, thank you for catching that.
Just started second cup of coffee; I'm running behind.

[idnurse41]

Thanks so much for the suggestions all! I'll work on it more and see about changing the opacity, etc. I appreciate your input!

[Redneck]

I think both pictures are too much alike (impression, size). I think a little more variety might look better (maybe one face, one action or something like it).

[idnurse41]

Originally Posted by Redneck

I think both pictures are too much alike (impression, size). I think a little more variety might look better (maybe one face, one action or something like it).

Ok thanks! I'll see what else I can come up with. Appreciate your time and input