Justin,
Getting advise while designing albums is a tricky thing. Everyone will have an opinion, maybe TWO opinions. You won't get anywhere fast. So take my advise with a grain of salt.
When designing albums I think first and foremost the images should stand out. In this case yours does not. They get lost in the boldness and busyness of the layout. In fact I did not notice the wording at all until I started to work on my example of what you should do. And overall, I think this layout is a little too bold.
The images you have are bold statements of the subject. Let the pictures be bold and as a contrast let the backgrounds become subtle. This way the images and the cute "word" edging will stand out more.
I didn't change any element or colors. I put a white layer under your background and reduced the opacity of your background to 35%. Then I applied a slight Gaussian blur to your background. I then put a thin black line stroke around the images. I think it makes a better presentation of the images. Now you can also see the wording now that it does not have the background with which to compete.
