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Posts: 159 Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: San Antonio, Texas Real First Name: Rick Camera: Canon 7D Can Others Edit My Photos: No iTrader Rating: 0 LIKES Received: 0 LIKES Given: 0 |
05-01-2007, 06:37 PM
I'm not a guru - just always learning like most of us are.
1. It seems that you are trying too hard to have two subjects in the photo. I don't think you should be so concerned about the detail in the background. I would try and blur it so it's not so distracting from the real subject - the couple.
2. It looks like you wanted to lighten their faces to get that shadow detail, but you applied it to the entire image and blew out the water and some of the leaves. Try and apply it to only the area your concerned with. There are several ways to go about it.
3. Without reshooting and just having this image to work with, I would duplicate the layer and use a levels adjustment to get that shadow detail, then use a mask to get back the original background. If you wanted you could also and another layer in between and blur it as to fake a shallow DOF. That you allow you to get your facial detail, not blow out the water, and direct the attention to the main subject.
If you re-shoot, you might consider some fill flash and a more shallow DOF.
Just a suggestion
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