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Posts: 26 Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: West Texas, Real First Name: Kathy iTrader Rating: 1 LIKES Received: 0 LIKES Given: 0 |
09-19-2007, 09:46 AM
I think you have a great start, but do have a couple of things I would do...
First, the shadows are very big. In places, the shadows are even obscuring faces (top collage, bottom right photo). I like the one with the tilted photos better, but that's just a matter of personal preference. Another rule I've been told in my scrapbooking endeavors is to not have people looking off the page. That tends to make the viewer's eyes follow theirs and fall off the page as well. For instance, the middle one on the left outside row, she's looking up and out. She'd probably be better on the right side, as would the blonde girl next to her. The blue seems a little bright, too, but then just because it looks bright on here doesn't mean it would print bright, I am definitely not an expert on printing.
Hope this helps! |
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