Is this too much?

[luis_relampago]

I personally don't think it is too much but what do you guys think I want a second opinion.

Before:

After:

[ttusa]

I prefer the first one- whites seem a bit hot on the second.

[luis_relampago]

Therese something like this?

[ttusa]

Definitely better!

[semperaggie]

I agree.

[BubbaGoose]

I like it.

I would also darken the body of his shirt
and dim her arm a bit
to put more emphasis on their faces.

[jchooper12]

I am not fond of the pose. If you are shooting for a maternity photo you need to put them in a position that empasises her tummy but also is flattering for her. This would work better if she was not pregnant. The edit is good overall though, just my thoughts!!!

[luis_relampago]

Thanks guys for your comments, I will try to better my self and this is what I need to become a better photographer. John I got better poses this was the first exposure I worked on. something like this:

[JasonWW]

I can't see the after. Can I post a modded version of the 1st pic?


The image in post #3 looks too artificial to me.