2nd ps attempt...

[doctahjones]

...using tracy hicks style editing (i'm really diggin it, dunno about ya'll)

again these were from my first studio shoot where i had very poor (because i didn't know what i was doing, heh) lighting, so i'm doing what i can with what i got. don't mind the shadow behind the model.....:)


c&c welcomed


original nef:




retouched: cloned out hair on left cheast, right shoulder, shadow middle chest and on right side of tube top; dodge/burn/saturate eyes; portraitrue 'normal'; smart sharpen 4%; sharpened; saturated a tad taking out a little yellow, and adding a little red (somewhere i lost the red in the bench). i think the eyes are alot better than in the first, but i couldn't get them to 'pop' like tracy does...

[venchka]

Different pose please. This one doesn't work for me.

[Darkman]

Wow. That looks awesome to me!

[smoothassilk]

Quite a bit of difference in the two. Much prefer the second one to the first.

[twoeyesopen]

You said you don't mind the shadow. But as long as you've done this much work, you could at least soften or lighten that shadow. You nailed the skin tones and a good job on the splotchiness in her hands and arms