Next Stop.. Main Street

[irkPaul]

one of my first photos..

18yrs young.

C&C please

[barP]

you know, this is the kind of excellent photography that unfortunately gets few comments on forums. very nice!

some comments....i wish it were bigger so i could see it better. that's just a posting thing. i might have cropped off some of the left, because there's a point where i don't think more track does any better job of telling the story.

i like this image, though, because it's easy to imagine a story. sort of gives me a feeling of waiting for a way to get to some other place, but always being on just the wrong track. escape is so close, yet so far...

wp.

[TxManx]

I like the overall concept of this image.

There's a horizon line that's tilted (see the building in the background? The window line on it tilts to the right.)

The entire picture looks like it's leaning to the right...

As a method of capturing the image, you can intentionally make the image lean, but that would require a bit more of a rotation...

You might want to re-think the border...because it's black, the bottom left of the image disappears into it. A 1 or 2 point white outline of the photo, then the black (or another color) border might look good...

[JohnT]

This works for me, tilt and all. Nice job!

[dbphotos]

Very nice. I'd like to see a bigger version. I like it all, except the yellow tint, but that's just personal preference. Very well done!

[kenw]

as mentioned, a white trim line between the image and boder (and a drop shadow on the text) will separate things quite nicely. The tilt bugs me more than the tint, but not in a major way. composition is excellent. The single person is absolutely top drawer.

Japan?

[irkPaul]

nope.. New york City

[irkPaul]

Thank you all.

[dbphotos]

I forgot to mention that I like the tilt. I think it accentuates the train.

[irkPaul]

Thank you david.