www.ajmartinez.com

[Anthony Martinez]

Launched a new site fairly recently, the pricing and contact pages are still in progress but I'd like input on the rest if you don't mind.

click here

[ka5txl]

Anthony,

I like the site, wish I had taken more photo's when I was in the service. your trip to vegas reminds me of my road trip in an M35 from Garland to Nellis and back. I think my butt is still sore 31 years later.

[Anthony Martinez]

Heh, thanks. I didn't even look at my bike for about two weeks after that ride. It hit 122˚F on Hoover Dam when we rode across. I was in black leathers. BadIdea™.

[semperaggie]

I like it because it is straight-forward

A few editing suggestions on the introduction which overall I think is really nicely-written:

Over the years I have either lived in, visited, or been deployed to over a dozen nations around the world including Mexico, France, Spain, Italy, China, Thailand, Malaysia, Singapore, Indonesia, Kuwait, and Iraq.

Maybe simplify this sentence to this?

My travels have left lasting impressions, including an appreciation for various artistic styles and a broader understanding of world cultures.

Pricing page:

I think this sentence is awkward:

With all offered services, I will discuss with you a variety of concepts and ideas in order to reach an agreement as to the desired feel and style of the session.

Estimates are available by request and will include detailed descriptions of all available options, as well as full disclosure of rates and included fees.

[Anthony Martinez]

Thanks, I'll take a look at those edits. Right now I can't do much since my baby sister (she's 19, but still..) had friends over last night and one of them was kind enough to spill water into my MacBook Pro. It's toast. Hopefully I can recover the data, but the website is decidedly back-burner until I'm up and running on a new machine.