www.photographybycarmen.net

[Photography By carmen]

would love to have my website critiqued...im always trying to find a way to make it better...any feedback would be awsome

[dryicerx]

Some thoughts...

• Center the Flash applet
• Definitely remove the Craigslist reference, along with the Wix stuff like Free Website link.
• On the Family section, it only has two images and their left justfied, throws the balance off
• Inconsistency of watermarks (some have it, some don't), and mixing B&W and Color photos in the strip just doesn't flow smoothly when viewed. In the same note, fonts... every page has a different one which is doesn't make for a smooth transition.
• The images being displayed are very small, I think it would give a bigger effect on the customers coming in with larger images. Larger higher quality images are a lot better than displaying many photos at once.
• This is a personal preference, music on sites.. specially not pop. If music is mandatory, a 50% volume ambient/classical... the current music also works on the front page only, when the sections change it stops.

The content of description, pricing, is clear and concise, I like that. I think with a bit of aesthetic looks and polishing, it'll be good to go. Good luck!

[Photography By carmen]

Thank you :) i've been having some problems with the editor i use...im currently looking for another one as well

*~Website has been updated, hopefully for the last time except some minor changes, had to go with a different template~*

[Hikin' Mike]

Get rid of the splash page, it's a wasted click. I want to see who you are, were you're located and what you do....ON THE HOME PAGE. If your concerned about SEO, then I'd change your <title> tag from 'Home' to your location, specialties and photography.