Darrell,
Here are several tips/thoughts in no particluar order. Hope this helps:
1. Check your images and colors on several monitors. Several are quite dark on my monitor as well.
2. At least one of the images has a large piece of what looks like lint on the lens and another spot (girl in red in hompage slideshow). Take a good hard look at all your images and make sure they are your best and in the best possible condition.
3. I don't like having to scoll to see the thumbnail images. It seems like main content and should be completely visible.
4. The zoom too makes your images look terrible. It is simple stretching your images and makes them look pixelated.
5. The link back to home shouldn't be buried in 'about'. Try to think like a client.
6. I don't understand the function of the 'website links' page. If a client wants to use google, why would they do it there?
7. I'd put a photo of you on the 'about us' link. It is, after all, about you.
8. I'm unclear why you are using people colored green/purple on some of your pages (like about and contact). Also, the nature shot on prices?
9. You need to change the titles of all of your pages so the words "photographer and artist website template" are changed to something meaningful.
10. As a start towards Search Engine Optimization, at least change the keywords in your metatags (in the head tag at the top of the code).
11. Your site relies heavily on javascript. This is a debatable practice as many browser versions have javascript turned off by default, which would wreck havoc with your design. It would be best to either not use it at all or have some alternative form of page structure and navigation so a user with
JS off could at least get the just of your site content.
Hope this helps....