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Sonny · **www.gametimephotos.com -** 05-08-2007, 02:35 PM

www.gametimephotos.com

With the help of rages4calm we revamped my web site. Switch from Flash to HTML & CSS. I have a different type market and customer base so we needed to keep it as simple as possible. I'm still not happy with the galleries web page but I have no clue what to do with it. Got any ideas I'd love to hear them.

C&C are welcomed please,
-Sonny

MarcoFromHouston · 03:49 PM

Quote:

“A photographer will capture the moments of an event you come to treasure in the future so that you can focus on creating them with your child today.”

I had to re-read this about 5 times.

Love the message, but the sentence seems odd. Too long maybe? Is punctuation needed?

How about:

Quote:

“A photographer will capture the treasured moments of an event for the future so that you can focus on creating them with your child today.”

Or maybe its just missing a word:

Quote:

“A photographer will capture the moments of an event you will come to treasure in the future so that you can focus on creating them with your child today.”

rages4calm · 05-08-2007, 03:45 PM

Looks great sprite thief.