www.PaintTheLight.com

[snidow]

I have completed re-done my site and would appreciate if some of you would take a look at it and let me know what works, what doesn't, what just doesn't look good and so on. Thanks in advance!

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[gardener]

Looks good to me although the scrolling function was rather jumpy...

[Aric C. Hoek]

The splash page is to big. I had to hunt to find the enter site button. This was my first thought after only a few secconds. When I get to a site, I want to get tot he meat of the matter as fast as I can. This may have something to do with the way I shop as well. I wiant to get in and out as fast as I can. I want to find what I am looking for with no delay.

[snidow]

Thanks Steve and Aric, I was wondering if the enter site button would be an issue and you have answered that for me. I appreciate your input!

[WarrenG]

Laurie,

My page is terrible so I am certainly not going to say anything negative...

My only advice might be in the way you present your comments. For example, you write... " Eastern Bluebird waiting to feed the babies who are down in the pole" whereas I suggest...

" A mother Eastern Bluebird scans the horizon for predators, before feeding her hungry babies which are nestled safely inside the pole"

I think wording can create a visual "link" to a picture and becomes much like a "story" with ebbs and flows for the viewer.

Just my 2 cents.

Cheers,

W