www.88photography.com

[ThiNguyen]

I am wrapping up on my new website. I would appreciate any comments or criticism that you may have.

www.88photography.com

Thi

[Michelle Allmon]

Here's my critique: You posted in the wrong forum! (There's a website forum)

Your pictures are awesome! Here are a few things that jumped out at me:

Your galleries have names like mWedding. What does that mean??

The text size on your pages don't match.

Your about page is "About Me." Then you say "We" right away, so it makes me wonder who "we" is. Then I realize I don't even know who you are! In the rest of your spiel you talk about "I." Then you say "Contact Us." I think you should start by introducing yourself or at least sign your name, unless of course your name is 88. And stick to either I or we.

[ThiNguyen]

Michelle,

Thank you for the comments. I made changes to the page already. I should read a bit better now.

I thought about putting the critic request at the website forum. But it is a template website I think the technical part of if should be OK. I want wedding photographer to criticize the website on the non-technical stuff instead. That is why I put it here. I hope it is OK.

Thank you for your comments.
Thi

[Michelle Allmon]

Your About section is SOOOO much better! As soon as my kids go to sleep I will look thru the whole site again.

[tc82742]

i like it.
we have the same flashpalette template.. LOL

[dcnctx]

Did I overlook the, "kiss the bride" photos? Seems like it would be good to have at least a couple of those. Looks good and works fairly smooth on dial-up. Nice job.

[OversighT]

I'm moving this thread to the website critique forum (sorry for catching it so late)


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