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[LWimages]

I've been working on my website for the past couple of days now.

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Let me know what you think about it and what needs to be changed/modified.


Thanks,
-- Louis

[JamesB]

I think it looks ok.

I do not see any pricing information under the pricing section, just credits

It does not work properly with Firefox. Maybe its because I dont have something loaded correctly for the flash player or something.

It does work fine in IE7

James

[Paulo]

That's pretty neat, Louis.
Maybe start your slideshow with a different image though. You have a great one in the gallery of the kissing couple on the little wooden bridge or even the one with the hands slipping on the rings. Nothing wrong with the kilt shot but it almost looks out of place. Also, I didn't really like the beeping when scrolling over the letters of "main, gallery, etc..."
Missing prices didn't bother me much. But I have noticed when people don't want to post all their prices, they'll include a 'starting at $xxxx'...



I really need to upgrade mine, already.

[adirty1]

something bothers me about the guy in the kilt. I have not figured out what yet but something is odd with that image.

[LWimages]

Austin: I know what it is - it is the rock to the far right. Most people say they thought it was a dog.

Paulo: Thanks for the critic. I do agree with your recommendations.
I will make the changes tomorrow.

James: I tried these all with different browsers, I think it is your flash setting.
Let me know if you can see it after you update your flash software.

Thanks again all!

[JamesB]

Originally Posted by adirty1

something bothers me about the guy in the kilt. I have not figured out what yet but something is odd with that image.

my wife asked me what was wrong with it as well....she thought he was taking a wizz

James

[JamesB]

Originally Posted by louis24x7

James: I tried these all with different browsers, I think it is your flash setting.
Let me know if you can see it after you update your flash software.

Im not sure what happened, but it just worked with FF. I did nothing on my end. It must be something on my end as this has happened before. It wont work, then it will 30 minutes later

James

[rott]

Originally Posted by JamesB

my wife asked me what was wrong with it as well....she thought he was taking a wizz

James

That's actually the first thing I thought too!

Only other thing I didn't like about the site was the amount of time for the fade on the pics. I think if that were shortened a bit, it would be good. Good work otherwise.

[picasso]

I like the site and I like the images. The only thing I can critiqe on is I am not so sure about your Welcome. You comment about your Photoshop and computer experience. I am not so sure your clients care how you arrive at your images or your computer experience but the end result. Describe your work, your passion and what you can do to them and make them look. My guess is most of these people have never heard of Photoshop and those who have it might could possibly work against you. Just my opionion. Maybe others could chime in.

Paul

[lscottpht]

Originally Posted by JamesB

my wife asked me what was wrong with it as well....she thought he was taking a wizz

James

Hahaha, I thought the exact same thing AND I thought it was a dog, too! Yeah, might want to change that pic. I also looked for pricing info. since you did list the packages. I don't list prices on mine, except what they start at, but I also don't list my packages out. Other than that, it looks good.

[adirty1]

yeppers that was what I was thinking. I didnt want to come out and say it but that's what I thought when I saw it. Might want to pull that image.

[okcwannabe]

I think it looks good but I am a big nerd about sentence structure, grammar, etc. Well, at least I am with business stuff like your website, which reflects on your business-certainly not so much on here. In the second paragraph on your welcome page, "My intense"...it runs on so much so that I find my self getting lost and confused in the middle trying to understand ALL of what you are saying. Where the comma is further down in that sentence, you should either put a period in there and make a new sentence after that or add a "With" in front of "my intense" so it makes sense. I would make it 2 sentences so it makes it easier to understand. I just glanced at this on another computer as flash player doesn't work on THIS work computer-(thanks IT!) so if I saw it wrong or read it wrong let me know. There was something off about the first paragraph too but I can't remember-I'll try and look after I get home and get rest! I hope you don't take any of this wrong way-just trying to help!