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Erin Kathleen · 09:03 PM

Yes, it's a template, but it's what I've got right now. I'm totally revamping my business including changing my business name. It's not live yet, but what do you think?? I could use some honest critiques/comments to tweak it before I put it out there (hopefully this weekend or Monday). Specifically are there any images you would remove? Any you'd move up in the order? Lead with a different one than I picked? Typos? Etc??

http://bludomain23.com/~erink/

Thanks!!!

boldimagery · 03-27-2008, 10:17 PM

Nice!!! Lookin good!

smdebnam · 03-27-2008, 11:21 PM

Hi Erin,

I think there is a typo listed on Page 5 of the Bridal and Engagement Portrait Pricing text found inside the Wedding Packages Link.

For Bridal Portriats it states, "Approximately 2-4 hours of photography at up to of 3 locations".

btw....Glad you're back!!

Erin Kathleen · 03-28-2008, 08:59 AM

Thanks, Shelley, but I must be totally sleep deprived. Where's the typo??

BTW - I need to email you.

12stones · 03-28-2008, 09:16 AM

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Originally Posted by Erin Kathleen

Thanks, Shelley, but I must be totally sleep deprived. Where's the typo??

BTW - I need to email you.

Very nice site. For the typo, the thing I see is that on the 5th page that Shelley was talking about "up to" doesn't look like it has a space between the words (4x).

On page 1 of your Portrait Info page, there needs to be a space between "kids" and the parenthesis.

Other than that, I love the simple background and the color scheme. The menu's easy to use, though the transitions seem a tad slow (I'm an impatient person though

), the gallery is great, and I like the font. Did you make this yourself?

smdebnam · 03-28-2008, 10:50 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Erin Kathleen

Thanks, Shelley, but I must be totally sleep deprived. Where's the typo??

BTW - I need to email you.

Email me whenever you get a chance. I want to see more pictures of the baby and hear how everything went.

Here's a print screen of typo.

mccls1030 · 03-28-2008, 11:28 AM

Erin, looks good!

Erin Kathleen · 03-28-2008, 11:59 AM

Thanks everyone. I'll fix the typos here in a minute and work on getting it online and whatnot. I have to make sure my current site is redirecting correctly and all that too.

12stones - I wish I'd designed it. It's actually a template where you fill in all the text, the colors and images (of course) and they provide the overall website. I can struggle my way through HTML but I'm lost when it comes to Flash or anything like that...

12stones · 03-28-2008, 12:49 PM

Looks all fixed and looks good. Flash isn't too hard really. I've got a great book if you ever need to do some of your own mods to your site. Let me know if you want it or need some HTML help.

toverman · 03-28-2008, 01:09 PM

Your site looks really nice.

Are you able to change the font at all? I noticed on the wedding packages that, at least for me, it was hard to tell if you're offering a $150 print credit or a $50 print credit because the "$" and "1" kind of smoosh together.

Erin Kathleen · 04-01-2008, 09:11 PM

Well, it just went live. I'm so excited!!! Check it out if you get a chance -

www.erinkathleen.com

I'd still love to hear any input you've got.

Jake · 04-01-2008, 09:44 PM

It looks great Erin!