Trying to improve an image.This is a discussion on Trying to improve an image. within the Weddings forums, part of the Showcase category; A friend I met in Hong Kong sent me some photos of his wedding. One caught my eye, so I ...
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06-30-2009, 08:22 AM
A friend I met in Hong Kong sent me some photos of his wedding. One caught my eye, so I started playing with it. Just trying to get better at this so any comments and critique would be highly appreciated.
1. My improvements or un-improvements.
2. Original image. 
Last edited by Angelo; 06-30-2009 at 10:00 AM..
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06-30-2009, 08:38 AM
I like your crop, but that might have been where I stopped (just an opinion, though). | | | |
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06-30-2009, 09:31 AM
Actually it was fine as it was..... better really.
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06-30-2009, 09:35 AM
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Originally Posted by toverman I like your crop, but that might have been where I stopped (just an opinion, though). | Took the words right out of my mouth. | | | |
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06-30-2009, 09:56 AM
That's what I like, honesty. | | | |
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06-30-2009, 10:57 AM
I like the original also. Maybe a small crop from the left. | | | |
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06-30-2009, 10:59 AM
i thought the original was the improved image....until i read the caption
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06-30-2009, 11:36 AM
I like the crop and warmer colors of the edited version, but I'm not a fan of the water color effect. Undo the watercolor filter (or whatever it was) and I think it would be better.
Great shot btw. | | | |
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06-30-2009, 03:37 PM
I personally like the space on the left, gives a better sense of composition.
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06-30-2009, 04:39 PM
HI, You can actually get rid of the people on the left of the image and make it a great pic. Try using overlays and highlight the bride. :o) susangilbertphotographer added 1 Minutes and 6 Seconds later...Double Post Merged Below
HOw do you post an image on here and I will show you what I am talkign about?? :o)
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06-30-2009, 04:46 PM
I agree to lose the effect, but to crop just a bit more open on the left than you did. Put the bride in the right 1/3 of the frame. | | | |
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06-30-2009, 04:46 PM
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Originally Posted by susangilbertphotographer HI, You can actually get rid of the people on the left of the image and make it a great pic. Try using overlays and highlight the bride. :o) susangilbertphotographer added 1 Minutes and 6 Seconds later...Double Post Merged Below
HOw do you post an image on here and I will show you what I am talkign about?? :o) | go to advanced post and click the paper clip off to the right of the fonts and sizes and upload an image
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06-30-2009, 04:56 PM
thank you. WIll do it now. :o) | | | |
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06-30-2009, 05:04 PM
OK I hope this works. Here is my fix to that pic. | | | |
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06-30-2009, 05:18 PM
I'm not the forum police, but I feel the need to point out that the OP has noted that it is NOT OK to edit his images. | | | | | Thread Tools | | | | Display Modes | Linear Mode |
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