Follow us on Twitter!
Follow us on Facebook!
 

Go Back   Pixtus - Photography Forum, Photographers, Photo Tips > Showcase > Weddings


My 2nd Wedding

This is a discussion on My 2nd Wedding within the Weddings forums, part of the Showcase category; My first wedding was a very nasty disaster...I feel like this one went much better, 2 years of practice have ...

Reply
 
LinkBack Thread Tools Display Modes
  (#1) Old
Account Banned
 
Jusselin's Avatar
 
Posts: 1,987
Join Date: Jun 2009
Location: Harlingen, Texas
Real First Name: Jusselin
Camera: 5DMKII
Can Others Edit My Photos: Yes
iTrader Rating: 8

Likes Received LIKES Received: 2
Likes Given LIKES Given: 10
My 2nd Wedding - 05-17-2011, 10:06 AM

Critique: CC:

My first wedding was a very nasty disaster...I feel like this one went much better, 2 years of practice have helped me for this one. Here are a few of my favorites, wanted to know what you wedding shooters think...what should i work on next time?

1.

2.

3.

4.

5.

6.

---------------------------
Canon 5DMKII - 135 L - Nifty Fifty... its all i need =]

Last edited by Jusselin; 05-17-2011 at 10:26 AM..
Reply With Quote
Sponsored Links

Premium Members do not see Google advertisements. SIGN UP today and help support our community.
  (#2) Old
Supa Dupa Poster
 
corralup's Avatar
 
Posts: 5,457
Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: Hitchcock, Texas
Real First Name: Sandy
Camera: D300
Can Others Edit My Photos: No
iTrader Rating: 0

Likes Received LIKES Received: 41
Likes Given LIKES Given: 2
Send a message via AIM to corralup
05-17-2011, 11:39 AM


Only thing I would suggest is to get them both in tighter on the third one. I personally don't like half faces. That's just me now!

---------------------------
http://www.pbase.com/corralup/root
The basic tools of lighting are principles, not hardware.
Quote from Light Science & Magic Third Edition.
Reply With Quote
  (#3) Old
Account Banned
 
Jusselin's Avatar
 
Posts: 1,987
Join Date: Jun 2009
Location: Harlingen, Texas
Real First Name: Jusselin
Camera: 5DMKII
Can Others Edit My Photos: Yes
iTrader Rating: 8

Likes Received LIKES Received: 2
Likes Given LIKES Given: 10
05-17-2011, 11:42 AM


i know, my back was literally up against a wall during this shot so i couldnt zoom out any more....the curse of the primes lol. But i didnt want to crop it either :shrugs:

---------------------------
Canon 5DMKII - 135 L - Nifty Fifty... its all i need =]
Reply With Quote
  (#4) Old
Senior Member
 
John_A's Avatar
 
Posts: 413
Join Date: May 2011
Location: Houston, Texas
Real First Name: Johnny
Camera: Nikon D80
Can Others Edit My Photos: Yes
iTrader Rating: 2

Likes Received LIKES Received: 19
Likes Given LIKES Given: 6
05-17-2011, 12:37 PM


Bags be gone.....
Reply With Quote
  (#5) Old
Senior Member
 
rusty_tripod's Avatar
 
Posts: 444
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: Mesa, AZ, Arizona
Real First Name: Alton
Camera: Canon 7D, Sony A200
Can Others Edit My Photos: No
iTrader Rating: 0

Likes Received LIKES Received: 0
Likes Given LIKES Given: 0
05-18-2011, 06:42 AM


Nice images over all. My immediate reaction when I saw the first image before seeing the others was that this is a big bride. Either it is a small hallway or she is a big woman. Unless I knew for certain that my bride was comfortable in her size, I, personally, would not included it.
Reply With Quote
  (#6) Old
Account Banned
 
Jusselin's Avatar
 
Posts: 1,987
Join Date: Jun 2009
Location: Harlingen, Texas
Real First Name: Jusselin
Camera: 5DMKII
Can Others Edit My Photos: Yes
iTrader Rating: 8

Likes Received LIKES Received: 2
Likes Given LIKES Given: 10
05-18-2011, 08:42 AM


shes not a big girl....the hallway was pretty tight.

---------------------------
Canon 5DMKII - 135 L - Nifty Fifty... its all i need =]
Reply With Quote
  (#7) Old
Forum Regular
 
BeccaJ's Avatar
 
Posts: 990
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Rosharon, Texas
Real First Name: Rebecca
Camera: Canon
Can Others Edit My Photos: Yes
iTrader Rating: 3

Likes Received LIKES Received: 28
Likes Given LIKES Given: 1
05-18-2011, 09:56 AM


Well, they're definitely better than my 2nd wedding. Which was indoors. Lol. i think it's a nice set, consistent with the portrait work i saw last.

great emotion in #2.

agree on comments about #3 - you kinda just have to be ready for that and position yourself accordingly. Because I think I'd like to see more of the candles also. and less of the background of guests. Next time! :)

---------------------------
Facebook : Blog : Twitter (BDavis516)

(and to whoever from my work who has nothing better to do than to follow my every move on here... Get a life.)
Reply With Quote
  (#8) Old
Forum Master
 
mchong75's Avatar
 
Posts: 1,311
Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: Frisco, Texas
Real First Name: Michael
Camera: Canon
Can Others Edit My Photos: No
iTrader Rating: 59

Likes Received LIKES Received: 14
Likes Given LIKES Given: 12
05-18-2011, 01:12 PM


Please fix the tilt on #1. Reminds me of walking through a funny house.

Looking over iPhone - Some of them looks out of focus??

---------------------------
5D MK II Grip | Canon 7D Grip | Canon 85L II | Canon 17-40L | Canon 35L | Canon 70-200 f/2.8L IS Mark II | Canon 100L IS Macro | 580 EX II (2) | Plus other toys
Reply With Quote
  (#9) Old
Account Banned
 
Jusselin's Avatar
 
Posts: 1,987
Join Date: Jun 2009
Location: Harlingen, Texas
Real First Name: Jusselin
Camera: 5DMKII
Can Others Edit My Photos: Yes
iTrader Rating: 8

Likes Received LIKES Received: 2
Likes Given LIKES Given: 10
06-04-2011, 10:28 AM


none are out of focus, maybe the quality...lately when i upload to photo bucket my quality is down sized....i only load there to post here though.


i agree about the less BG and more candles, as well as the titlt on 1. but which way is it tilting? i cant tell....its making me dizzy now.



here are the rest of the images though.

Leann & Steve - LNJ Photography

---------------------------
Canon 5DMKII - 135 L - Nifty Fifty... its all i need =]
Reply With Quote
  (#10) Old
Member
 
LauraM's Avatar
 
Posts: 157
Join Date: Mar 2011
Location: Plano, Texas
Real First Name: Laura
Camera: Canon
Can Others Edit My Photos: Yes
iTrader Rating: 0

Likes Received LIKES Received: 9
Likes Given LIKES Given: 16
06-09-2011, 01:39 PM


Nice shots! My only thing about them that others haven't mentioned yet is they are all centered vertically and horizontally. Mix it up! The creative angles will push this even further. Shoot down, up, on the side and everywhere! It will make your pictures more interesting. :)

---------------------------
Laura Miller Canon 5D Mark II, 24-70mm 2.8, 70-200mm 2.8 IS, 50mm 1.8, and a backup.
Photography Facebook | Gallery
Reply With Quote
Reply

Tags
2nd, wedding

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On



Visit Our Sponsors
 

Google Sponsors

Premium Members do not see Google advertisements. SIGN UP today and help support our community.

Copyright ©2004 - 2011, Abel Longoria - www.Pixtus.com
Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.7
Copyright ©2000 - 2012, vBulletin Solutions, Inc.