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This is a discussion on help improving this photo within the Weddings forums, part of the Showcase category; Finally decided on one but would like to improve if possible. Shot in RAW....

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help improving this photo - 12-13-2006, 01:50 PM


Finally decided on one but would like to improve if possible. Shot in RAW.

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12-13-2006, 02:34 PM


What do you feel it needs? i really like it..LOVE the feeling you get shooting near a row of big trees!

maybe clone out the red tip of his nose?

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My Try - 12-13-2006, 02:49 PM


I did not really like the background, some distracting points in it. Just a quick edit, could be done better.

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12-13-2006, 03:23 PM


I like the background... it seems strangely familiar!


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12-13-2006, 03:47 PM


Deja vV. (or is it)? j/k I walk or ride through there everyday to work.
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12-16-2006, 04:55 PM


thanks to everyone that responded. I hope this one seals the deal.
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12-16-2006, 05:46 PM


I know this thread is about over, but have you ever thought about cropping it a tad giving the subjects a little more weight and not so balanced?

Kinda like the sample below?
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