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Originally Posted by jesswhs1323 269 views... 8 comments (other than mine).. WOW.
I can take constuctive negatives comments... it a great way to learn... However, it is kinda frustrating when there are bearly any comments and such high views. |
ok... here goes:
a) number your pics
1) too much mandalay, not enough couple IMO. i do like it though
2) looks kind of flat, could have used white screen left above groom's head
3) cute, would be nice if we could see his eyes (I dont like not being able to see all eyes, with a few exceptions)
4) eyes are overdone, i think the green is too; a little distracting
5) dodge above her lips
6) very nice
7) good shot
8) neutral
9) i like the silhouette but not so much in B&W (maybe try and reprocess with color)
10) good shot
11) neutral
12) they should be looking up or at each other IMO
13) good shot, maybe "pull her shirt down"
I like most of the shots, great work. I'd be satisfied with them and I'm sure the bride and groom will be too and that's really all that matters. my harsh CC is just the harshest I could be on a job well done (probably the same CC you'd get from FM) :) Good job!!!